Saturday, May 12, 2012

Zero..

Image-Life in Shadow-By Admin



From zero
A endless journey 
Stack of mask

Swirls of joy
Shadows of sorrow
Tales of life

Stack of mask
Kid, teen, youth, adult
To zero





Most of us live our life with masks, but, we never realise that the life itself is a stack of different masks. Life involves us playing many roles at times- from zero(birth) to zero(death). Zero defines the infinite life(endless journey)- all in it's big circle- where 'the start' and 'the end' is indefinite!

This Haiku is written for Haiku Heights. The prompt for this week is Mask.
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25 comments:

  1. Eileen T O'Neill .....May 12, 2012 at 1:06 AM

    Jaideep,

    A very concise journey through the steps of life itself. Excellent...

    Eileen

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    1. Jaideep RaoMay 12, 2012 at 12:13 PM

      Thanks, I never realised that zero had this powerful!

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  2. PranitaMay 12, 2012 at 9:48 AM

    Wow... i think this is one of ur best by far...! Very very enlightening!!! Hats off to the thought... and a beautiful picture!

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    1. Jaideep RaoMay 12, 2012 at 12:16 PM

      Thanks Pranita, trying to get better and hope I succeed :)

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  3. AnonymousMay 12, 2012 at 12:29 PM

    Much thought went into this creative Haiku.

    Pink Sandpaper

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  4. Anu ~*~May 12, 2012 at 12:54 PM

    Must say its a unique idea , creative thinking ..
    nice picture also ..
    Anu :)

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  5. ChèvrefeuilleMay 12, 2012 at 5:12 PM

    Wonderfully composed. Very creative thinking and written with such wonderful words.

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  6. carol l mckennaMay 12, 2012 at 5:34 PM

    Love them all ~ especially the last one ~ 'stack of mask' ~ a life journey well expressed ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  7. GraceMay 12, 2012 at 5:40 PM

    I like that stack of mask ~ Very nice haiku set ~

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  8. AnonymousMay 13, 2012 at 7:26 AM

    Very insightful and nicely crafted.

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  9. shalaaaanMay 14, 2012 at 12:59 PM

    Wow.

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  10. AnonymousMay 14, 2012 at 4:36 PM

    Intelligent and deeply insightful Haiku. Makes one ponder. Very nice.

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  11. Sri ValliMay 14, 2012 at 9:21 PM

    Wow! wow!...What an insightful haiku....I really enjoyed reading this....Favorite among the ones you wrote till now :)

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  12. PattiKenMay 14, 2012 at 11:01 PM

    I love this. Dust to dust, a series of masks in between. Very thought provoking.

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  13. Jaideep RaoMay 18, 2012 at 3:26 PM

    Thank you :)

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  14. NAWALMay 19, 2012 at 2:54 PM

    the second set, was marvelous!
    loved it to the core... incredible job!

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