Saturday, June 23, 2012

Lone world..

Image- Lone word, By Admin


All the time
I smiled at strangers
World at me


Never thought
Twice before I walked
Held new hands

Names misspelt
Mom is the lone word
Voiced my soul




It's a heartfelt haiku. Let's make this world a true global village. Hold new hands!

This Haiku is written for Haiku Heights and Haiku My Heart. The prompt for this week is Support.

Please read my haiku- Masks of Wonderland that I wrote for a poetry competition by Manipal Blog.com. I'll highly appreciate your comments, likes and shares. Thank you for your constant Support (Thanks Leo for the right timing of the prompt!). 
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21 comments:

  1. Cressida de NovaJune 23, 2012 at 12:45 PM

    The innocence and acceptance of a child supported by Mom is well expressed in your poe,

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  2. AnonymousJune 23, 2012 at 3:04 PM

    nicely done...

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  3. Amrit SinhaJune 23, 2012 at 4:28 PM

    Very nicely written... "Mom is the lone word" loved this one.

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  4. carol l mckennaJune 23, 2012 at 7:16 PM

    ...Mom is the lone word voiced my soul ~ wonderful line ~ very strong message ~ lovely haiku ~~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

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  5. Tarun MazumdarJune 23, 2012 at 7:16 PM

    what a phenomenal tribute to the most supportive person on planet Earth...

    http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/06/support-haiku-june-23-2012.html

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  6. joanneJune 23, 2012 at 8:18 PM

    Trust is also a key issue here, along with support......lovely photo and haiku

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  7. kaykualaJune 23, 2012 at 8:50 PM

    To be friendly towards others is the right thing to do. We'll find it easy if we make the first approach. It is true Jaideep!

    Hank

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  8. Vinay Leo R.June 23, 2012 at 11:56 PM

    good mother you have Jaideep. a wonderful support to have.

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  9. PranitaJune 24, 2012 at 6:55 AM

    Touching haiku... names misspelt, mom is the lone word is my fav part!!!

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  10. vivinfranceJune 24, 2012 at 1:10 PM

    You have gone straight to the heart of the meaning of "support"

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  11. *Dark Angel*June 24, 2012 at 3:37 PM

    Mom is the lone word,
    Voiced my soul! touching!

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  12. UnknownJune 24, 2012 at 10:04 PM

    Very heart warming.

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  13. AnonymousJune 25, 2012 at 5:44 AM

    The epitome of support!!
    Reassuring

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  14. ND MitchellJune 25, 2012 at 9:30 PM

    Really like:
    "Never thought
    Twice before I walked
    Held new hands"
    It sums up how basic our need for support is. Brilliantly summed up.

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  15. Rita OdehJune 26, 2012 at 7:35 PM

    I like the double faces of support expressed in this lovely short poem.The support that you GIVE and the support that you TAKE. Your support for the strangers is part of your humane character.
    You give part of what you were abundantly given.
    Enjoyed reading:))

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  16. Anu ~*~June 26, 2012 at 8:19 PM

    Lovely haiku .. very true jaideep .

    "Mom is the lone word
    Voiced my soul"
    I love these lines ..

    " MOM" .~ moral support
    Thanks for sharing :)

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  17. Christine "Chrissi" L. VillaJune 26, 2012 at 11:21 PM

    Very touching haiku. thanks for sharing! :-)

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  18. Sri ValliJune 27, 2012 at 12:48 PM

    Very beautiful touching haiku!

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  19. Kodjo DeynooJune 30, 2012 at 11:13 AM

    The anchor support is the mom, beautiful

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  20. GraceJune 30, 2012 at 5:09 PM

    To hold new hands is important ~ Opening our hearts and sharing them, its wonderful to have such a support ~

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  21. AnonymousJuly 3, 2012 at 8:48 AM

    Support offered beautifully.

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Thank you for leaving a kind word at each offering,
it is in this generosity that a true sense of
belonging is born. [Lines from Rebecca's blogpost]

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