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| Image- Seven shades, By Admin |
A peacock
Sheds a feather for
First shower
Seven shades
In a moonless night
Tempts to fetch
Distant dreams
Ordinary me
Pen marvels
Goals are always at a distance. Or to put it in a different way- distant things become our goals. Why confine goals to a thing or an object, make it a dream, make it a marvel!
This Haiku is written for Haiku Heights, OSI and Haiku My Heart. The prompt for this week is Ordinary.
I love the second haiku a lot! It's painting a beautiful piture in my head. I imagine a moonless night, with colors/dreams flying around... n m running around lik a lil kid not sure which dream to catch first!!! Amazing!
ReplyDelete:). Same here, colors that are visible on a moonless night are absolute bliss!
DeleteSeven Shades..love this as well. nicely done!
ReplyDeleteI am glad, thank you!
DeleteI enjoyed the haiku set...:)
ReplyDeleteThank you sir for the brilliant surprising theme!
DeleteLovely haiku ~ my favorite too is the last one ~ great message ~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteNamaste Carol! thank you :)
DeleteA source of inspiration ~ Lovely set ~
ReplyDeleteGraceful comment! Inspired by Life!
DeleteI've learned something new today - a peacock sheds a feather for first shower. That's interesting.
ReplyDeleteyeah it does!, it's a belief also here!
Deleteordinary dreams
ReplyDeleteturn extraordinary
if chased with belief
thanks for the inspiration. you may be ordinary, but you can definitely be extraordinary too.
yeah, true!, loved your inspirational comment!
DeleteSet begins very mystically, then anchors with the last 3 lines....I could feel myself coming back to earth, humbly....
ReplyDelete:). Humbled :)
DeleteYou are definitely EXTRAORDINARY bro! I loved the haiku set so much.. every one of three :):):) marvelously penned :)
ReplyDeleteThank you sis!, now we are "EXTRAORDINARY" :)
Deletethe cadence of
ReplyDelete"Seven shades
In a moonless night"
has me reciting it over and over. beautiful on the page and in the mouth.
Now I realize that it really sounds great :)
DeleteAn apt trio. Salute!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteThe colours of the peacock are extraordinary. 'Admire your deep take on the theme.
ReplyDeleteThanks, yeah, colors really are "extraordinary", all His art!
DeleteLovely synchronicity, that we both post about peacocks. I love your photo and haikus. Makes me dig a little deeper and think beyond the surface.
ReplyDeleteoh yaa, I'l visit your blog now!
DeleteI was JUST THINKING about you and Fran above both doing peacocks...and there she is!
ReplyDeleteHa ha, that's called "soul of universe" :D
DeleteGorgeous haiku... you picture a story and all kinds of images with your words, wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThank you Marit :)
DeleteAwesome haiku....
ReplyDeleteSeven shades
In a moonless night
Tempts to fetch
LOved this lines most!
Thanks Valli!
DeleteLiked the last haiku of distant dreams.
ReplyDelete:). Even I like distant dreams :)
DeleteDeep in meaning and full of hope.A never ending story. It's good to be inspired, Jaideep!
ReplyDeleteHank
Glad you liked it Hank, thank you :)
DeleteNice set of Haiku. Last one is inviting, inspiring.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog Harshad sir!
DeleteColor even in darkness, and Newton's canonical seven shades including the spurious "indigo" as well! Nicely done!
ReplyDeletethanks Bruce!
Deleteawesome set of Haiku Jaideep...inspiring...loved the 3rd one...awesome... :)
ReplyDeleteYes indeed! distant dreams then means unlimited writing :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing haiku + with lovely pic ...
ReplyDelete3rd one is too good ..:)
Thanks Anu, and special thanks for your lovely haiku dedication to all of us:)
DeleteOMG. Wow. simply wow. "seven shades in a moonless night tempts to fetch" this one was a total rocker. and i agree with you. if we dont cast our eyes far beyond what they can see, we can never search for the extraordinary in ordinary things. how can we set our dreams then? :)
ReplyDeleteand i must say, your pen marvels big time :) :D
i simply LOVED this one :)
Thanks for kind words Kirti :), yeah, agree to your point of searching the extraordinary in ordinary things!
DeleteBetween the light of the morning and the moonless night, there is a (DISTANT DREAM) which a poet seeks to make it come true through seeing the extraordinary(PEN MARVELS) by observing the ordinary:(THE LOSS OF THE FIRST FEATHER, THE SEVEN SHADES).
ReplyDeleteStunning set of haiku.
Enjoyed reading.
~Rita
Love the way you interpreted it, this was the picture that I attempted to put, Awesome observations!
DeleteI am so glad that I could touch the spirit of poetry which is unique in you. I will look forward to explore your poetic experience by reading more of your haiku.
DeleteSure Rita, my pleasure, the feeling you get when you see a comment that matches your thoughts are priceless :)
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