Monday, July 23, 2012

Eight miles..


Linking to The Mag & MYM

Shadow grew taller than life..
Your name lightened up my path..

Rabbits that played in the moon..
Are my companions in the empty streets..

After eight miles, my shoelaces still intact..
Like I have your thoughts tied my heart..

Months will vanish midst serenity of dark nights..
Till Knight with shining armour kills our shadows..

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8 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaJuly 23, 2012 at 4:24 PM

    A (k)nightly poem :-) loved it fully :-)

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  2. Brian MillerJuly 23, 2012 at 8:31 PM

    Rabbits that played in the moon..
    Are my companions in the empty streets..

    haha love that couplet....smiles....may your knight find you...

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  3. UnknownJuly 24, 2012 at 1:03 AM

    While walkin walkin walkin . . .

    Me : hey .. wat do u see on d moon wen u luk at it ??
    Jai : Ohh .. I see 2 cute rabbits out dr ... !! :P
    Me : awww ... and what I see is a Happy Smiley Face :) :)

    Ty J !! :) :)

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  4. Tess KincaidJuly 24, 2012 at 3:40 AM

    I like the shoelaces still being laced after eight miles...

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  5. ninotazizJuly 24, 2012 at 6:25 AM

    Came full circle on shadows. I liked this story.

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  6. EJJuly 24, 2012 at 7:54 PM

    So beautiful. Visiting from Mellow Yellow Monday.

    Come and see my YELLOW post, thanks.

    New follower here, hope yu follow back.

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  7. hyperCRYPTICalJuly 27, 2012 at 3:26 AM

    Like this. Well done.

    Anna :o]

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  8. hyperCRYPTICalJuly 30, 2012 at 1:47 PM

    Hi Jaideep!

    Thank you for your welcome comment and becoming my ninety-ninth follower.

    I am now your thirtieth!

    Kind regarAnna :o]

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