Monday, July 16, 2012

Last word..



Mixed feelings
Razor sharp deep rays
The last word

Unique prompts
Heart warming visions
The last word

Fireflies glowed
Sketches in darkness
The last word




I henceforth won't be writing poetry in this unique form- haiku. Journey has been splendid. Lot of new idea, criticism, praises, friendships, just like Firefly sketching in darkness. I'll try my luck with other forms. Perfect prompt to end too! Thank you all and best wishes! 

This Haiku is written for Haiku Heights and Haiku My Heart. The prompt for this week is First.
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13 comments:

  1. Blossom VydrinaJuly 16, 2012 at 9:32 PM

    The third is beautiful. Please don't limit yourself, don't quit haiku to try new forms, there's room for all.

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  2. GraceJuly 17, 2012 at 6:24 AM

    I wish you well in your journey ~ In the end, I think the words are more important than the form ~

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  3. Claude LOPEZ-GINISTYJuly 18, 2012 at 3:25 PM

    Great!
    The greatest thing about a journey is how you insert your mental journey in the reality of your everyday life.

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  4. carol l mckennaJuly 18, 2012 at 4:53 PM

    Best of luck in your poetic or prose journey ~ wonderful haiku ~ great reading your work ~~ thanks, ^_^ ( A Creative Harbor)

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  5. kaykualaJuly 18, 2012 at 10:45 PM

    It's a choice, Jaideep! Do whatever is comfortable. Form is not important! Come back when you feel like it but continue writing. Your haiku is perfect. Don't make it the last word!

    Hank

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  6. VinatiJuly 19, 2012 at 12:27 AM

    That is one beautiful set.

    But why is this the last one? You can try other forms and continue writing Haiku too. Hmm?? :-)

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  7. PranitaJuly 19, 2012 at 3:11 AM

    Last word? No... the journey of an artist has no end...

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  8. ND MitchellJuly 19, 2012 at 12:53 PM

    Really liked your haiku, which I met for the first(!) time here. Will be back to read more of whatever you write...

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  9. Frank WatsonJuly 20, 2012 at 8:11 AM

    It's all about the journey, isn't it? I go through waves of inspiration and nothingness and all you can do is ride the waves...

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  10. LocomenteJuly 20, 2012 at 12:32 PM

    Y not??

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  11. Amrit SinhaJuly 23, 2012 at 1:06 AM

    I tagged you for the Liebster Blog Award :-)

    http://livinglifegreenspeck.blogspot.in/2012/07/my-1st-blog-award.html

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  12. JaskirancanvasJuly 26, 2012 at 3:56 PM

    Hi! Added you as Liebster Blog Award recipient.

    The Link:http://jaskirancanvas.blogspot.in/2012/07/on-receiving-liebster-blog-award.html

    Keep Creating! :)

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  13. DulcinaAugust 19, 2012 at 10:19 AM

    Fine trio of Haikus, hope not the last ones.
    Thanks for your Green in a Haiku.
    Nice to meet you here!
    :)

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