Thursday, April 19, 2012

One to Motherland..

Calm jingles
Shield my splendid forts
Honeybees


In the history of mankind, every country has invaded and attacked. India has been a exception till date.
We have believed in peace, harmony, coexistence, and jingles have guarded our forts. Honeybees, also have these values, particularly, strong family bonds. There is a prayer here when line #2 and #3 are read together!

This Haiku is written for The Heights Of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is  Honeybees.

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6 comments:

  1. PranitaApril 19, 2012 at 2:22 PM

    Absolutely loved the idea... Very nice! :)

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    1. Jaideep RaoApril 19, 2012 at 2:50 PM

      Compliment is special as it's coming from the guru!

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    2. PranitaApril 19, 2012 at 3:11 PM

      Awww... i'm growing wings...! ;) Buzzzz!

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  2. Sri ValliApril 19, 2012 at 8:19 PM

    Precise and beautiful...I love this 3-5-3 format!

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    1. Jaideep RaoApril 19, 2012 at 8:27 PM

      Thank you, I'll try sticking to this format :)

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  3. Mohini PuranikApril 19, 2012 at 9:59 PM

    Very patritotic, superb.

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