Friday, April 27, 2012

World twinkles..

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Glossy home
Hold back temptations
World twinkles









Modern society has become materialistic. Most of us find solace in glossy and superficial things. In the process, we have limited ourselves, stopped thinking out of box, resulting in a less innovative lifestyle. If these temptations are held back, we will soon start realising that it's not only the star that twinkles, even the world does!

This Haiku is written for The Heights Of Haiku - April 2012 and The MAG. The prompt for today is Temptation.

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29 comments:

  1. Ramesh SoodApril 27, 2012 at 12:08 AM

    A good thought here.. liked the way you said it..

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  2. PranitaApril 27, 2012 at 12:08 AM

    Excellent.. esp ur line frm d description "not only the star that twinkles, even the world does!" Beautiful msg...!!!

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  3. Tarun MazumdarApril 27, 2012 at 12:09 AM

    the world needs to think like this... great work!

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  4. LocomenteApril 27, 2012 at 12:09 AM

    The World twinkles!!!
    Nice one...

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  5. CYNOSUREApril 27, 2012 at 12:14 AM

    beautiful and deep thought...excellently penned down... :)

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  6. Mohini PuranikApril 27, 2012 at 12:19 AM

    The pic and words are so beautifully matched. I agree with you Jaideep.

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  7. SurbhiApril 27, 2012 at 12:58 AM

    different thought ... very nice :)

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  8. Yellow TulipApril 27, 2012 at 1:35 AM

    Very well said... totally agreed...

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  9. GraceApril 27, 2012 at 4:37 AM

    Nice thoughts for temptation ~

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    1. Jaideep RaoApril 27, 2012 at 9:57 AM

      The picture prompt was also in mind, hence this thought..

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  10. ElleceeApril 27, 2012 at 5:14 AM

    Unique thoughts on temptation. Well done haiku.

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  11. carol l mckennaApril 27, 2012 at 5:53 AM

    Hmmmm ~ great message ~ well crafted haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  12. PattiKenApril 27, 2012 at 7:21 AM

    Interesting take on the haiku and the photo prompt.

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  13. Sri ValliApril 27, 2012 at 8:09 PM

    Beautiful thought with beautiful message!...Beautiful haiku :)

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  14. ChèvrefeuilleApril 27, 2012 at 9:34 PM

    Wonderfully composed. It has a deeper meaning to me. Thank you for sharing.

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  15. AnonymousApril 27, 2012 at 9:36 PM

    Nicely done ~~ has numerous layers to it.
    Happy Friday ~~
    Day 27 ~~ My Diet's Expiration

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