Friday, April 27, 2012

Tall Shadow..

Tall shadow
In the clear water
Seed crafts waves


This would have happened to most of us and wish it happens to all. In the portrait here, a couple is standing under a tree on the banks of a beautiful lake. Their love is as  pure/clear as the water of lake and is seeded/deep rooted in their hearts. A seed from the tree falls to lake, magical waves, crafts a salsa of the tall shadows!

This Haiku is written for The Heights Of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is  Clarity.
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33 comments:

  1. Tarun MazumdarApril 28, 2012 at 12:04 AM

    Seed crafts waves.... amazing... very well done

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  2. PranitaApril 28, 2012 at 12:04 AM

    Beautiful picture ur haiku paints in my mind, even without the description! :)

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  3. Mohini PuranikApril 28, 2012 at 12:05 AM

    Very sweet feelings and love like seed...just awesome.

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  4. Ramesh SoodApril 28, 2012 at 12:34 AM

    It is indeed a good haiku..well done..RS:)

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  5. Yellow TulipApril 28, 2012 at 1:43 AM

    Lovely choice of words... magical...:-)

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  6. ElleceeApril 28, 2012 at 2:24 AM

    Very nice haiku. A lovely picture painted with your words.

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  7. carol l mckennaApril 28, 2012 at 3:07 AM

    great haiku with lovely message ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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    1. Jaideep RaoApril 28, 2012 at 5:00 PM

      Carol, like your comment very much, particularly the Namaste :)

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  8. kaykualaApril 28, 2012 at 10:51 AM

    Clever take on the joys of being one with that person. And a clearly explained philosophy. Great haiku Jaideep!

    Hank

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    1. Jaideep RaoApril 28, 2012 at 5:02 PM

      Yeah, joys of being one with that person is the best feeling :)

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  9. vivinfranceApril 28, 2012 at 11:30 AM

    Beautiful - haiku and clarification.

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  10. Sri ValliApril 28, 2012 at 11:39 AM

    Seed crafts waves...Beautiful haiku Jaideep :)
    Fuddling thoughts

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    1. Jaideep RaoApril 28, 2012 at 5:03 PM

      :). Waitin to read all haiku of my freinds, just got the net connection!

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  11. Adura OjoApril 28, 2012 at 2:24 PM

    Nice haiku and lovely images, Jaideep. Thank you for your comments on my blog.

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  12. Diana TenevaApril 28, 2012 at 6:16 PM

    I love your picturesque haiku, especially this tall shadow!!!

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    1. Jaideep RaoApril 29, 2012 at 11:17 AM

      :). When I set off, tall shadow was the only image I had!

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  13. ChèvrefeuilleApril 28, 2012 at 11:23 PM

    Awesome haiku. What a great image you have painted here with your words.

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  14. CYNOSUREApril 29, 2012 at 12:28 AM

    superb one Jaideep...really fantastic... :)

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  15. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 29, 2012 at 12:57 AM

    I am right there with the seed!

    Seeking Clarity—and Shadows

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  16. Gemma WisemanApril 29, 2012 at 3:35 AM

    A magical array of romantic thoughts!

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  17. AnonymousApril 30, 2012 at 9:13 AM

    Very very nice!! :)

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