Friday, April 27, 2012

Tall Shadow..

Tall shadow
In the clear water
Seed crafts waves


This would have happened to most of us and wish it happens to all. In the portrait here, a couple is standing under a tree on the banks of a beautiful lake. Their love is as  pure/clear as the water of lake and is seeded/deep rooted in their hearts. A seed from the tree falls to lake, magical waves, crafts a salsa of the tall shadows!

This Haiku is written for The Heights Of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is  Clarity.

33 comments:

  1. Seed crafts waves.... amazing... very well done

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  2. Beautiful picture ur haiku paints in my mind, even without the description! :)

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  3. Very sweet feelings and love like seed...just awesome.

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  4. It is indeed a good haiku..well done..RS:)

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  5. Lovely choice of words... magical...:-)

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  6. Very nice haiku. A lovely picture painted with your words.

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  7. great haiku with lovely message ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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    1. Carol, like your comment very much, particularly the Namaste :)

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  8. Clever take on the joys of being one with that person. And a clearly explained philosophy. Great haiku Jaideep!

    Hank

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    1. Yeah, joys of being one with that person is the best feeling :)

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  9. Beautiful - haiku and clarification.

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  10. Seed crafts waves...Beautiful haiku Jaideep :)
    Fuddling thoughts

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    1. :). Waitin to read all haiku of my freinds, just got the net connection!

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  11. Nice haiku and lovely images, Jaideep. Thank you for your comments on my blog.

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  12. I love your picturesque haiku, especially this tall shadow!!!

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    1. :). When I set off, tall shadow was the only image I had!

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  13. Awesome haiku. What a great image you have painted here with your words.

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  14. superb one Jaideep...really fantastic... :)

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  15. A magical array of romantic thoughts!

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  16. Very very nice!! :)

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